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Wednesday, April 26, 2006

running a new contest

I'm packing to go out of town yet again, but before I leave, I thought I'd let everyone know that I've got a new contest up & running on the Contest page of my website (http://www.heidibetts.com/contest.html).

This time, I'll be giving away a green M&M cookie jar, a bag of M&M Minis, & an autographed copy of my February Silhouette Desire, SEVEN-YEAR SEDUCTION. I hope you'll take a minute to check it out, &--if you're not already signed up--join my Mailing List for a chance to win.

Good luck! And I'll chat with you all again Monday!

Tuesday, April 25, 2006

what are we reading these days?

Okay, I didn't mean to disappear for two whole days, but when I tried to post last night, the site was down. Sorry about that.

And since I haven't asked in a while, I'm wondering what everybody out there is reading. Anything exciting or really good that I should add to my TBB list?

My reading is slow-going, as usual, but I'm working on three books at the moment: Kill the Messenger by Tami Hoag, Beyond Innocence by Emma Holly, and Code Name Cassandra by Meg Cabot.

Cassandra is actually the second book in Cabot's "1-800-WHERE-ARE-YOU" YA series. I'm reading them all in a row & enjoying them a lot. There's only one thing I can't seem to wrap my mind around... Shouldn't that be "1-800-WHERE-R-U" to fit the normal number of digits in a phone number? Yes, I realize it's insignificant, but it bothers me. :-p

How about the rest of you? What are you reading these days? Enquiring minds want to know.

Saturday, April 22, 2006

today is earth day!

Let's all do something to help the environment & make the planet a cleaner, better place.

*If you don't already, start to recycle. Recycle everything--plastic, metal, paper, cardboard, glass, tires, appliances, used motor oil...everything, everything, everything.

*Stop using Styrofoam. Styrofoam is evil; it is positively ruining our environment. So for Earth Day, why not make the decision never to use the vile stuff again?

*Take your own containers to restaurants. You can not only cut down on waste by not asking the restaurant to supply containers for your leftovers, but you can avoid Styrofoam, too, since that's what most restaurants provide. (I recommend Glad brand resealable containers...they're easy to carry, easy to see through, & can be refrigerated, microwaved, washed, & reused. They can also be recycled down the road & come in a dozen very convenient sizes.)

*Gas prices are already high enough, & those exhaust fumes aren't helping anybody. Why not walk as much as you can--to the corner store, the post office, or even all along the strip mall instead of moving your car closer to the stores you want to hit?

Can you think of any other ways we can help to save the environment for both ourselves & future generations?

Friday, April 21, 2006

holy crap, I'm plotzing!

Seriously, I think I'm dreaming. Did I have a stroke & pass into the land of Oz? I keep pinching myself, & it definitely hurts, but maybe I'm just imagining the pain in my unconscious, dream-like state.

I got another phone call. (You know, for a girl who normally hates the phone & will only answer if I think it's going to be important, I am suddenly starting to form a real fondness for that little invention.) This time, my agent says he has some new & very good news for me.

Okay, I'm at a complete loss as to what it could be, but I'm totally willing to listen.

There's this anthology being put together...maybe more of a collection, really...for HarperCollins, of hot, sexy paranormal stories. Kim Harrison (OMG, Kim Harrison!) & Marty Greenberg are editing, & there are going to be a number of other very big, bestselling, headlining authors involved. (Remember those "Love in Vein" paranormal erotica collections a few years ago, the ones Poppy Z. Brite edited? Well, it's sort of like that, only they want to go in much more of a romance direction this time. I think, if I understand correctly.)

Anyway, he got me in! My agent got me into this fabulous, wonderful, sure to be a blockbuster collection of sexy paranormal stories. I will not be one of the headliners. In fact, I sort of envision a cover with very large font announcing, "Edited by Kim Harrison & Marty Greenberg...with stories by [Very Big Name Author], [Another Very Big Name Author], & others..." I will, of course, be one of the "others," named only on the Table of Contents page. LOL

But who cares?!? I am going to be working with...involved with...linked to...some of the biggest names in the business. And I get to write a hot, sexy paranormal story--which, with that many authors involved, probably won't even need to be very long. I already know what I'll write, too. I actually worked up a proposal a while back for a very sexy dragon novella, & my agent said it will be perfect. Weeeeee!

I was too dazed to ask for any of the pertinent details while we were on the phone. I have no idea when the deadline will be, or when the book will be out, or even who some of the other authors are. And at the moment, I don't care. I'm sure I'll find out when I need to know.

And get this...Kim Harrison (OMG, Kim Harrison!) is going to be contacting me. Don't know when, don't know how, but Kim. Harrison. Me. In touch. E-mailing. Talking. Appearing together between the covers of a book.

Oh, yeah, I'm plotzing, all right.

And I almost forgot! The title of the anthology--at least at the moment--is HOTTER THAN HELL. How cool is that?!? :-D

Thursday, April 20, 2006

did somebody sprinkle fairy dust on my head?

Seriously. Because I'm suddenly feeling very, very lucky. Or maybe I should say very, very blessed.

I've always said that this business--as well as life in general, really--is sort of a feast or famine proposition. Either nothing is going on & you could just about slip into a coma from all the monotony, or everything is happening at once (be it good or bad) & you feel like tearing your hair out from the stress & busy pace.

I've also always said that when it comes to good news in this business, when it rains, it pours. Truly, on several of the loops I'm on, things were dead quiet all winter. Nothing was happening, everyone was just moving along, working on their current projects & minding their own business. Then suddenly, just about the time the snow started to thaw, there seemed to be this dominoe effect of good news. People getting new agents..selling first books & fifteenth books...finaling in contests...hitting bestseller lists. Like, every day, someone seems to post some new piece of good news. Which is great, I just find it amusing that we, as a group, seem to hit dry spells together, & then get flooded with exciting news together.

Anyway, I've been lucky enough to be able to celebrate the three contest finals for WHEN THE LIGHTS GO DOWN, which have happened really close together. Then I was invited to participate in the "Dakota Fortunes" continuity series. And now...

drum roll, please... :-)

Late yesterday, I was asked to be part of a "sexy beach read" anthology for Harlequin in the Summer of 2007. I'm so excited! I've never done a novella or been part of an anthology before, but have always wanted to! And Stephanie Bond and Leslie Kelly are the other two authors who will be participating...could I be in better company? :-D

Of course, I'll also admit to being a little nervous, since the outline is due soon after I'll be turning in the manuscript I'm working on now, & the actual story will be due soon after my deadline for the "Dakota Fortunes" book. But I can totally do it. If worse comes to worse, I just won't sleep, eat, go to the bathroom, breathe... :-P

Then comes the part where I'm on my own for coming up with the "sexy beach story" idea altogether. That's kind of nice; it will offer me a lot of freedom. But it also means I'll have to do a bit of thinking (uh-oh :-p) & brainstorming, since I don't actually have a beach-themed plot in my head at the moment. Something will come to me, tho, once I've had a little time to let things simmer. I even have a couple of friends in mind who will totally come to my aid if I need someone to brainstorm with or bounce ideas off of. (They don't know it yet, of course, but they will. :-))

So that's my news for today. Still doing a little happy jig...in between swigs of cough medicine, because dancing apparently makes it harder to breathe when you've already got a chest cold. :-/

Wednesday, April 19, 2006

but I'm feeling much better now

Okay, I'm really not. I'm feeling marginally better; sometimes I think I'm getting better, then sometimes I go back to thinking I'm at death's door. :-p

But I got a phone call this morning that definitely perked me up a bit...

WHEN THE LIGHTS GO DOWN is a Finalist for Oklahoma Romance Writers' "National Readers' Choice Awards"!!!!

Yee-haw! Suddenly, I'm really glad I answered the phone. LOL I was in the middle of hacking up a lung when it rang, & seriously considered just letting it go to voicemail. So happy I didn't! :-D

This is so exciting! That makes three finals all for the same book, which makes me want to pinch myself. Of course, I'm also starting to develop a complex. I mean, I did have two other books out last year besides LIGHTS... Were they awful? Were they no good? Did everybody hate them? I know, I know--I shouldn't think that way, & these things are all very subjective, anyway. One person's Sistine Chapel is another person's Velvet Elvis, right? LOL

I can't wait to share the news with my agent & editor, except I can't seem to get e-mail to send this morning. Called my ISP & they're "working on it," but there's no telling how long I'll have to sit on my little announcement before I can start contacting everyone I know. (I'd call, but I sound like I've been smoking three packs a day for twenty years, & no one needs to listen to that. :-P)

Tuesday, April 18, 2006

pez she sez

Yesterday when I posted, I forgot to mention the Pez Museum! How in heaven's name could I forget to mention the Pez Museum when it was such fun?!?

Just around the corner from the Crayola Factory was a small building that housed the Pez Museum and Purple Cow Ice Cream. (Everyone said the ice cream at the Purple Cow is fabulous, but I didn't try any. Maybe next time.) But the Pez stuff was cool. It was just this little room filled with displays of dispensers, but I had no idea so many characters had been manufactured over the years. They had big ones & little ones...Star Wars, Pink Panther, Pooh & Friends...everything.

My brother would have loved it, so I picked up a postcard & some Pez refills in fancy flavors for him. :-)

So there...I made up for forgetting the Pez Museum the first time around. :-p

Monday, April 17, 2006

I'm back, but I'm siiiiiiiick

I'm back from my visit to the Pocono-Lehigh RWA Chapter. It was a really fun weekend; I'm glad I went!

It sprinkled a bit on the way--bringing on flashbacks of the last time I'd travelled in that direction, in my desperate attempt to get to the NJRW conference last October :-P--but the entire trip actually passed much more quickly than I'd expected, & thankfully without incident.

The hotel was great! They had a fitness center (only 3 machines, but it was still nice, & I used one of them Saturday morning), a small pool (I hadn't packed a suit, of course, but next time I will!), & continental breakfast. They also had coffee & hot water for tea available 24hrs. That was especially nice, since I was fighting with my sinuses & allergies all weekend, & having hot mint tea 'round the clock really helped!

Friday night, I had dinner with three of the PLRW members, which was fun. Then Saturday morning, I gave my talk. There were actually more people in attendance than I'd expected for Easter weekend. I'm so glad! I had visions of only 2 or 3 members showing up & the Chapter basically thinking my visit had been a complete waste of time. :-p

But they were a great group! They seemed to enjoy my talk & had lots of good questions afterwards. At the very end, I signed books & got a chance to chat more one-on-one with everybody. All in all, I'd say the weekend was a great success. :-)

After leaving the library where the workshop was held, I probably should have just headed home, but instead went downtown to the Crayola factory. I'd been hearing about it & wanted to check it out for myself. Well, the place was really set up more for kids than adults, but it was still neat. They even had a room where they were showing how crayons were made. I got there at the very end of the process & didn't feel like sticking around until they started over again, but that's one thing I actually would have liked to see. Maybe next time.

And would anyone be surprised to hear that I found the gift shops the most fun of all? Yeah, probably not. :-P Not the Crayola one so much as the one for the Canal Museum. (Everything was sort of connected, in this big building that took up the entire block.) I got the most adorable planter with about six frogs perched all around the edge, a set of three frog figurines that do the "hear no evil, see no evil, speak no evil" thing (too cute!), & two pairs of dragonfly dangle earrings. I'm not even a huge fan of dragonflies, but I couldn't resist. One is what they call "swing" earrings, with both sky blue & turquoise stones...I know just what top I'll wear them with! :-) And the other has little amber teardrop stones...I have no clue what I'll wear those with yet, but I'm sure I'll find something.

Soon after that, I did head home, & that's when I realized I was in for the big C-O-L-D. (Now referred to as "The Cold From Hell.") I've had sinus trouble all winter--for some strange reason, since I've never, ever had sinus problems before--& just have not been able to kick it. Like I said, even before I left, I was fighting it & had a horrendous sore throat. I wasn't sick, mind you. I felt fine, except for those sinus symptoms that are more annoying than anything else. (And wouldn't you know that I've been fine the past few weeks, but they'd crop up again right before I was heading out of town for a speaking engagement. You know, the kind where your throat is kind of, um, necessary. 8-P)

So anyway, on the way home, I started coughing, & just from the way my chest felt, I knew I was in for a doozy. Sure enough, I am now sick as a dog. Whatever was rolling around in my nose & throat before moved down & has taken up residence in my lungs. I just hope I didn't make anyone else sick. I don't think I did, since I wasn't really close enough to breathe on them for long. And I swear that if I'd known I was getting sick instead of just dealing with a sinus infection, I would have warned them all to keep their distance. I'm also glad that I didn't feel like this while I was there because I probably would have just laid my head down on the table & said, "Here are my notes, pass them around." :-P

The trick now will be to get rid of this, whatever it is before I'm supposed to head out again for the WRW Retreat in Harpers Ferry, WV, next week. Ugh. I do not want to be sick for that! If I am, I probably won't even go, but that's an even more depressing thought than being miserable all weekend. It doesn't help, either, that everyone I talk to says that this (whatever it is) has been going around all winter & lasts for weeks. Sorry, but I don't have weeks. It's got three days, tops, to move on--or find another host body to infect. And I'm taking every over-the-counter cold remedy I can find to help it along. LOL

So that's the recap of my weekend. I hope you all had a Happy Easter...or maybe a good Passover...& are feeling better than I am.

As for me, I'm going to go lie down before I fall down. :-(

Thursday, April 13, 2006

getting ready to take off

I'll be packing today for my trip to Easton, PA. I'm giving a workshop (my one on "Writing Category") Saturday morning for the Pocono-Lehigh Chapter of RWA, but it's quite a trip all the way across the state, so I'm taking off early.

I'll also be traveling in the exact same direction as I tried to last October for the NJRW conference. You know, the one where it rained so badly there were big accidents on I-80 that closed the highway for hours upon hours, & I ended up turning around & coming home. :-( I sure hope nothing like that happens this time. Yes, it's supposed to rain again, but I'm hoping it's not quite the downpour we got last Fall. And I'm leaving a day early, so hopefully that will help. Keep your fingers crossed I make it all the way there without incident. :-p

I've already got my suitcase out & am pretty sure I know what I'm going to wear. Lord, it's been such a long, hibernating winter, I can't remember the last time I got dressed up. And it sort of hit me like a lightning bolt last night that, Oh! I'm going to need shoes! LOL Yes, I actually had my outfits all laid out...& was apparently planning to go barefoot the way I do around the house. Then I had to dig thru my closet & try to find my dress shoes because I tend to pack them away after the "conference season" has ended.

But I'm getting there. I have my list & think everything I might need is on it. Now it's just a matter of finding it all & getting it packed.

Also found out today that my new bookmarks (the second order to replace the icky ones) have been shipped & should arrive early next week. Not in time for this workshop, obviously, but that's okay; I don't really need them until the end of the month.

See you Sunday (or maybe Monday), I guess!

Wednesday, April 12, 2006

just when you thought it was safe to go back in the water

Got my earrings, but not my hair dryer diffuser thingie.

And then, I made a very big mistake. Right before bed, I decided to watch the last half hour of Open Water. The beginning had been kind of slow & boring, so I figured I'd just zip thru the end & be done with it.

Uh-huh.

And I should warn you that there will be SPOILERS in here, so if you haven't seen the movie & don't want to know anything until you do, stop reading now.

Now, I like scary movies--usually. Of course, I try not to watch them at night, because if I do, I tend to have nightmares afterwards. But I never expected this movie to get all that frightening. I was even reading at the same time, only watching with half an eye (you know what I mean :-p) so that if it got too intense, I still wouldn't be all that scared.

Oh, right! When I saw all those sharks swimming around in a big cluster, I just about wet myself. I have this thing about sharks...I love them; I think they're magnificent creatures & should never be killed, even if they bite someone. But I also have a VERY healthy respect for them. Meaning that if you go into the ocean, you're essentially walking right into a shark's kitchen, & if you get bitten or eaten, it's your own damn fault. You knew the risk. It's not like they come on land to get to us. (Unless we're talking about that "Land Shark" on SNL. :-)) So even tho I like the ocean & will dip my toes in occasionally, you will not catch me swimming out to sea or deep sea diving or doing anything else that equates with knocking on a shark's front door & asking, "What's for dinner?"

So then, thanks to seeing that many sharks all swimming around together & knowning that bought people bought it in the end, would you be surprised to hear that I didn't sleep very well? Snort. I didn't have any full-blown nightmares where I was lost at sea or getting attacked by Great Whites, but I kept seeing shark faces & remembering the movie. That was enough to make me toss & turn a bit.

And then today, I was talking with a friend about the film, & she told me that there's a question as to whether things really happened the way the movie depicted. I knew it was based on real events, but I don't remember hearing the controversy of whether the people had died or faked their own deaths. That's very interesting.

I did have two problems with the film, tho... Well, three, if you count that I don't know how they know what happened out there if there were no survivors, but...

#1--I don't know about you, but if I'd been in that situation, I'd have tried to swim for one of those boats at the very beginning. I don't care how far away they were, at least by swimming, I'd have had the chance of getting close enough for them to notice me. I would not have just stayed where I was, bobbing up & down, waiting for Jaws & his cronies to eat me.

#2--I can't believe that the guy got bitten by a shark, was bleeding all over the place, then had time to bleed to death before the sharks came back & finished him off. And her, too. I mean, once there was blood in the water & the sharks knew that what they'd been bumping into was food, they'd have gone back & had themselves a little two-course meal.

Am I right? Or am I the only one who thinks this? Well, no, I'm not, because my friend agrees with me. :-) But did anyone else notice these tiny details & wonder about them?

I don't know about you, but I'm going back to my favorite shark attack movie of all time: Deep Blue Sea. Those sharks may be genetically altered, but they're still not as scary as the ones in Open Water. Because the ones in Open Water were real. Yikes.

Tuesday, April 11, 2006

new hair & new earrings

Well, I got my hair done this morning for the Pocono-Lehigh Romance Writers workshop I'm doing this weekend. It needed it, believe me. I've let it go since, I think, October, so I had roots & little gray shoots (shh...I'm too young to have gray hair, I swear!), & raggedy layers galore. Now, it's all nice & trimmed, & I went with a brownish-auburn color...very similar to my natural brunette, but with a hint of red.

The girl who does my hair also told me she thinks I might have a bit of a nickel infection in one of my newer ear piercings. One of the holes has been giving me some trouble the last couple weeks, getting sore & a little swollen, & she thinks I need some nickel-free earrings. So I might actually run to town now to see if I can find a pair. Hey, the sooner I try the new earrings, the sooner I might be able to get the soreness to clear up, right?

As long as I'm there, I'm also going to look for one of those foam sock type things that you slip over the end of a hairdryer to diffuse the air. I don't know about you, but if I dry my hair without a diffuser, I end up looking like I've been making out with an electrical outlet. :-P

So that's my plan for today--take the new hair out for a stroll, get new earrings that hopefully won't cause puffiness & infection, & try to cut down on frizzy, "electrified" hair. Wish me luck. :-)

Monday, April 10, 2006

my author copies just arrived!

Yee-haw! I was sitting in my office, working at the computer, when I saw the UPS truck fly past the front windows. I even turned my head & watched it go, thinking, "Well, darn it, they must not have anything for me." (Every time a UPS or FedEx truck goes by, I think they should bring me something. LOL)

But next thing I know, I hear brakes squeal & see the big brown truck start backing up...to my house! Yippee! I jumped up & ran to the door, & sure enough, the driver was coming down the walk with a box that had the Harlequin symbol on the side. I joked with him about missing my house...he's only been here, like, a million times before...& he kind of blushed & said he'd been thinking about something else & apparently couldn't do two things at once. Hey, I know the feeling.

But my copies of MR. AND MISTRESS are finally here, & they are gorgeous! (Yes, I know I say that every time I get author copies of a new book, but it also happens to be the truth every time.) I can't wait to flip through & explore every single page.

I even love the faux newspaper write-up on the first page. Here it is:

AROUND TOWN
The Elliotts Strike Again!

Manhattan's wealthiest family is once again hitting the tabloids, thanks this time to playboy Cullen Elliott. While the sexy sales director of SNAP magazine has been seen escorting some of the city's most beautiful women, Cullen has been hiding a deep, dark secret--a mistress hidden away in the playground known as Sin City.

According to reliable sources, Cullen's secret lover is Misty Vale, a long-legged, green-eyed ex-showgirl straight from the Vegas Strip.


And he's brought her home to Manhattan. To introduce her to his parents--editor Daniel and attorney Amanda Elliott--in anticipation of his pending nuptials, perhaps? New York society holds its breath to hear the respectable family's reaction.

The rumor mill is abuzz over on Park Avenue where the Elliott publishing empire holds court. Something--or someone--major had to have pushed the confirmed bachelor to propose. Could it be the mistress is carrying an Elliott heir?

We'll be following the story...

Too cool. If this weren't my story & I read that, I'd definitely have to pick up a copy. It's too intriguing not to. :-)

And... First one to leave a comment gets a copy, hot off the presses! :-D

Sunday, April 09, 2006

quote of the day

Youth is a wonderful thing. What a crime to waste it on children.
--George Bernard Shaw

Friday, April 07, 2006

new website contest!

We're home from the vet's, all shaved & adorable. I wanted to post a picture of how cute Angel is with short hair, but he won't stand still long enough. :-p Ever since we got home, he's been pacing around, checking every little thing to make sure the house is exactly as he left it. (You'd think he'd been gone a month instead of only overnight. LOL) But he did great, & all his tests came back in good shape, too. Yay!

Some of you may already know this, but for those who don't, I've got another contest running on my website. (http://www.heidibetts.com/contest.html) This time, I'll be giving away an autographed copy of my February Silhouette Desire, SEVEN-YEAR SEDUCTION, & a little blue cloth M&M basket, filled with packets of delicious M&Ms. (Mmm...makes me hungry just looking at them!)

You can read the rules & instructions at the above URL, & then enter by joining my Mailing List. And if you're already subscribed, then you're already entered!

Good luck! (And part of that luck will be if those M&Ms actually make it to the winner unopened. :-D)


Wednesday, April 05, 2006

April flowers...or April (snow) showers?

It's been kind of quiet around here today, but we did get snow. Snow! In April! Can you believe it?!? Sheesh. Altho, I don't know why I'm surprised...or disappointed--this is Pennsylvania, after all. But the weather was just starting to get nice. I could wear a jacket instead of my heavy coat. Light pajamas instead of the fleece or flannel ones. Now I'm back to bundling up. :-( I sure will be happy when Spring makes up its mind to blow in & stick around for a while.

I did get approval on my synopsis for FORTUNE'S FORBIDDEN WOMAN this afternoon, tho, which is a big yay. (And a sigh of relief.) I can't actually start that story until I finish the current one (BLACKMAILED INTO BED, unless the title gets changed on me) but I've gotten 6pgs written on it so far today, so it's coming along. And I hope to do more tonight.

Then tomorrow, I have to get up early to take one of the kitties to the vet. Nothing serious; every year around this time, my long-haired kiddo's fur starts to get matted & I take him in to be groomed. Cats aren't always as easy to work with as dogs, so they dope him up just a bit & shave him nearly bald while he's asleep. (This isn't for looks, it's for comfort & convenience. And the closer they shave, the longer it takes for the fur to grow back & start to cause problems again. Plus, I got him a coat for Christmas, so even if the weather stays chilly, he'll be warm. :-))

As long as he's there, he'll also get some bloodwork done, a full physical exam, & any shots he needs. I'm not really worried, but I will admit to being a little concerned. Even tho we've done this before & he's always been fine, he is getting up there in age; anything could happen. But hopefully, nothing will.

And on that note, I'm going to grab a bite of dinner & get back to the book. Toodles!

Tuesday, April 04, 2006

another reason to happy dance



Yippee! I just found out that WHEN THE LIGHTS GO DOWN is a finalist for the First Coast Romance Writers' Beacon Award in the Short Contemporary category. Weeee!

I can't believe this book has finaled in two contests in the past two weeks! Wow. I'm a little stunned. But happy...very, very happy. :-D

Monday, April 03, 2006

Writing a Kick-Butt Synopsis That Sells

Here's the article I promised... Hope you enjoy!

WRITING A KICK-BUTT SYNOPSIS THAT SELLS by Heidi Betts


The hardest part of a writer's job is often creating a sparkling synopsis for his/her story. Unfortunately, a synopsis is also a writer's strongest selling tool. And for anyone who thinks that after they sell, they won't need to write a synopsis anymore...I'm here to tell you you're wrong, wrong, wrong! In fact, after you sell, you will probably (eventually) start to sell only on synopsis.

There are several steps I take when I sit down to write a new synopsis. For one, I plot my book using a simple point-by-point method. Now, everyone plots differently, but I've found this is the easiest way for me to both map out the story and slide immediately into the synopsis. It's not hard at all. I just sit down with a tablet and pencil and start making notes about the characters and what will happen in the story, in the order the events occur. Sort of like, This happens, then this happens, then this happens... I include anything pertinent to the characters or story, but the points do not have to be only plot/action related; conflict and motivation are extremely important, as well. For instance, I might jot down that because the heroine is depressed about turning thirty, she dresses up and goes to a club she's never been to before. That's not only the action that gets her to the club where the hero is, but the emotion and motivation behind the action, and I build from there, both where the characters' conflict/motivation and the story's plotline are concerned.

Once I've plotted my story in this point-by-point fashion, I use that list as a guide for the synopsis. Every plot point gets embellished and smoothed out in my normal writing voice and style. This is important, because although a synopsis tells what happens in your story, you don't want your synopsis to be at all boring or stilted. It should read very much like the book it's pitching, including your personal voice and style, emotion, sexual tension, the five senses where appropriate, etc. If your story is funny, use some of that humor in the synopsis. If it's scary, build some of that fear and tension. However, where your story will be written in past tense, the synopsis should be written in present tense. In other words, if, in your story, the heroine opens the front door to find the hero on the other side, you would write: She opened the door to find him standing there, looking as sinfully handsome as ever. In the synopsis, you might write: [The heroine] opens the door to find [the hero] standing there, as sinfully handsome as ever.

In a synopsis, you always want to stick to the main characters only--the hero and heroine, or the hero, heroine, and possibly a villain or very important secondary character(s). Don't include any secondary characters who aren't absolutely pertinent to the plot. This is because editors read a lot of synopses and manuscripts every day and don't have time for superfluous information. Keep it simple. Focus mainly on the growing relationship between the hero and heroine and the points of the story that directly affect them. I say this because I assume we're all writing romance. If you're writing a Romantic Suspense or a Futuristic, then sure, there are going to be more plot elements you need to mention. But if you're writing straight romance, then remember that the romance matters more than a million plot points. And as much as possible, use the characters' names rather than general nouns such as "he" and "she". This makes the story feel more immediate and reminds the editor that these are your main characters, these are the people the story is about, these are people she (and the reader) will care about.

As a rule of thumb, you should have one or two synopsis pages for every 10,000 words of your manuscript. For Silhouette Desire, the word count is 50,000, so my synopses are usually five or ten pages long. (Usually closer to ten, because the more detailed I am in the synopsis, the smoother the writing of the story goes later.) For a 400-page/100,000-word single title manuscript, you would probably want fifteen or twenty pages to your synopsis. This always depends, of course, on the structure of the story; a simpler plot may not garner you as many synopsis pages, while a longer storyline might need a few extra.

The next thing I do is to follow a simple five-step formula for every synopsis I write. Those steps include: 1.) blurb, 2.) what the hero wants, 3.) what the heroine wants 4.) what keeps them from getting what they want, and 5.) the conclusion. This formula can also help you plot your story, since those are the basic elements you need to focus on--conflict, motivation, etc.--when you write a romance novel. For each of these points, I write at least one paragraph of the synopsis, usually more.

And always share all of the pertinent information about your story in the synopsis. You do not need to mention what your heroine eats for lunch in chapter three, but you do need to say why she shows up on the hero's doorstep in the middle of the night. Don't leave any loose threads or unanswered questions to pique the editor's interest--you won't, you'll only annoy her and cause her to send you a rejection sooner rather than later. If you want to build the suspense or keep readers guessing until the last minute, do that within your story, not with the tool you're using to sell that story to a publisher.

Here is one of the synopses I used to sell my June 2005 Silhouette Desire, BLAME IT ON THE BLACKOUT so you can see an example of what I've talked about above:

For two long years, Lucy Grainger has worked as Peter Reynolds's personal, in-home assistant. And from day one, she's fought to hide the fact that she's half in love with her brilliant but ruffled, sinfully handsome boss. He, on the other hand, doesn't seem to know Lucy exists.

Peter Reynolds spends every spare moment of his life struggling to create unique computer programs and make his freshman software company a success. But as far as he's concerned, a man can't build a thriving business and maintain a healthy family life. His own father had all but abandoned him and his mother in the quest for corporate achievement, teaching Peter that rather than hurt the innocent people in his life, he has to choose. And Peter has chosen to cut himself off from any inkling of emotional attachment. No woman is worth the distraction or risk to his growing business endeavors.

If he were to get romantically involved, however, it would be with a woman like Lucy Grainger. Not only is she the best damn assistant he's ever had, but Lucy's pretty face and drop-dead gorgeous body are the things erotic dreams are made of.

As she's done on and off for the past year, Lucy is contemplating finding a new job, away from her mouth-watering but emotionally unavailable boss, when Peter asks her to accompany him to a black tie affair where he may be able to meet up with potential backers for his software packages. Reluctantly, Lucy agrees. She knows how important the budding software company is to Peter and will do anything she can to help him achieve his goal.

As Lucy and Peter are leaving the flashy event, a city-wide blackout hits, trapping them alone together in the hotel's elevator. For all the years she's been acquainted with Peter, Lucy never realized he was claustrophobic. In the dark, enclosed space, he begins to hyperventilate. Lucy tries everything she can think of to calm Peter down, but finally only a kiss distracts him from his panic. The kiss leads to a moment of unbridled passion--something Lucy has imagined and hoped for, but never thought to actually experience.

When the power comes back on, Lucy and Peter quickly straighten their clothes and try to look as though nothing has happened between them before the elevator doors open. But pretending for a group of strangers can't remove the memory of Lucy's warm, willing body from Peter's mind. Suddenly, he's thinking of Lucy in ways he never before allowed. And given his attitude about personal relationships ruining professional fulfillment, his thoughts and feelings for Lucy after that night come as a complete and unpleasant surprise.

Peter is also concerned about an unexpected pregnancy, since they didn't use protection during their ardent encounter in the elevator. For a few weeks afterwards, he hounds Lucy about her health, watching carefully for signs that she may be carrying his child. When it becomes clear that Lucy isn't pregnant, Peter has no more reason to shadow her every move. But what bothers him is how much he wants to stay near her.

An out-of-town business trip arises, giving Peter the perfect excuse to keep Lucy in close proximity. He insists she accompany him, using the pretext that he may need a personal secretary to take notes or run errands. While they are there, they end up once again making love.

This time, Lucy knows she can't go on this way. Her feelings for Peter are out of control and she realizes she will never get over him by sticking around and letting her unattainable fantasies get the best of her. A job opens up across town and she accepts, deciding that being away from Peter is the only way she'll ever be able to heal her battered heart and get on with her life.

When Lucy's letter of resignation crosses Peter's desk, his world comes crashing down around him. Though he hadn't admitted his feelings for Lucy even to himself, he never thought the day would come when she wouldn't be there . . . bringing him coffee in the morning, reminding him of his appointments in the afternoon, listening to his exuberant plans for the company, making him toss and turn in his bed each night. She's been steadfast and reliable, and is one of the biggest reasons he looks forward to waking up and getting to work every morning.

Now Peter realizes his life is about to change forever--not for the better--and he doesn't like it one bit. But Lucy will never agree to come back to work for him simply because he asks her to or doesn't want his comfortable routine to change.

Peter knows what he has to do, and for once it doesn't include putting business first. He goes to Lucy and makes her an offer he hopes she won't be able to refuse: whatever the other company is offering her, he'll beat it. Plus, he'll make her full partner in his corporation--she can remain his personal assistant or take over another aspect of the business (which he's noticed before she's very talented at), whatever she wishes. The only catch is, she has to marry him.

Lucy is stunned by Peter's proposal. She has never cared about money or professional success as much as love and family, but Peter has always been the exact opposite and she didn't expect him ever to change. Now, though, he seems completely sincere, ready to start a new chapter of his life and put love ahead of everything else. And he wants to do it with her.

With all of her dreams suddenly coming true, Lucy is only too happy to marry Peter and show him how wonderful life can be when you're successful in both business and love.

Notice how I begin with a couple of paragraphs that could easily be found on a back cover blurb. Notice how I use the hero's and heroine's names as often as possible and focus on their budding romance and growing relationship This synopsis is also a pretty good representation of my writing style and voice. I don't tell what happens in a monotone, but try to liven things up and make it as much like a short, entertaining little story as possible.

Remember, this is your main tool in selling your work. Sad, but true. Think of a synopsis as a media sound bite or flashy advertising campaign that tells the basic storyline of your product in a very succinct and engaging way.

Once you master the art of designing a kick-butt synopsis, it will forever make your job as a writer easier and hopefully gain you an equally kick-butt publishing contract.


[Note: I couldn't resist adding this... I have a writer friend who, for the first time, is writing her synopsis before she writes a book. I've been harping on her for quite a while to do it this way, not only so she can get a really clear picture of how the story will move along, but because using a synopsis as a detailed outline is the best way I know to stay on track while you're writing.

So anyway, she took an online synopsis-writing class a couple months ago & is just now trying to apply what she learned to her own synopsis, & this is what she told me: "Heidi, you give better advice on writing synopses...I worked with her tips all Saturday, then Sunday--not liking what I was producing--ditched it all & started over using your approach. I'm halfway finished already & like it much better. You're the best, girlfriend!" (Well, of course I am, but that's beside the point. :-P)

All joking aside, I'm not saying I know everything about writing synopses or even that every one I do is a gem, but I do know that my life has gotten much easier since I began using this approach. Synopses are no longer hair-pullers for me, & I can usually get one written in an afternoon...sometimes an hour or two. So if you're struggling with them yourself, give this method a try & see how it works.]

Sunday, April 02, 2006

sawdust gets in your eyes

Only one taker on the cover flats? Really? Well, all right. But the offer still stands, if there are any late-comers out there. And tell your friends about it, in case they want to pop over & grab one!

Didn't get a heck of a lot done this weekend because of a little "home improvement" project. A few weeks ago, one of the handles on the kitchen faucet popped off & was not replaceable, so I've been without hot water. (Turns out that teapot can come in handy for heating more than just tea water! :-)) But the kitchen has been needing a new sink for about a decade, anyway, so it was a good excuse to start shopping around.

So yesterday, the plumber came to install everything. New cabinets, too, since the other sink had just been attached to the wall. The poor guy was here until 6am. I kid you not. Yeah, Daylight Savings Time played a small part, but mostly it was hours upon hours of hard work. He didn't have to stay that long...I wasn't holding him hostage or anything!...but once he got started, he said he just wanted to keep going, so I let him. I even went to bed around midnight & told him to wake me if he needed anything or when he was finished.

And here it is...


That's about the best photo I could get, considering it's almost 10pm, & the battery on my camera kept saying it was dead, even tho the little power monitor claimed it was still half-charged. :-P You're also going to have to trust me when I say the old sink & set-up was much worse. This is Good Housekeeping or Better Homes & Gardens material in comparison. :-)

My favorite part, of course, is the faucet. It's so nice. It pulls out & can be turned to a finer spray to clean vegetables & such. It also has its own soap dispenser--which I loved in theory, but discovered this morning when I went to fill the darn thing that it's probably going to be a pain in the butt. It's waaay back there at the back of the cabinet, & you have to crack your head into the bottom of the sink at least twice to reach it. LOL Still, it beats a slimy soap dish that seems to need cleaned every five minutes.

And as long as he was down there, I had him install a water filtration system, too. It's just a small, under the sink version, but I love the idea of having cleaner water, without all those chemicals the water companies add. I'm going to use it for drinking, cooking, the cats (of course!), watering plants, etc. But it has a separate faucet so I don't have to use it for dishes or scrubbing the floor. (Yeah, like I spend so much time scrubbing the floor. LOL)

So that was my weekend. I did get my synopsis for FORTUNE'S FORBIDDEN WOMAN written, & am now working to polish it so I can send it off to my editor when she returns from a weekend conference. And tomorrow, I think I'll post an article I wrote a while back for my RWA Chapter--"Writing a Kick-Butt Synopsis That Will Sell"--for those of you who may be writing yourself & are interested in that sort of thing.

Until then, have a good night!

 

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